Just two comments.
D) looked on by the classical cellists of the world as perhaps the world’s best, who plays in an ever-changing style all his own, which also employs
--> who wrongly modifies the world’s best.
which wrongly modifies his own.
I feel that 'who' does modify correctly 'the world's best' meaning the best person. Therefore, we may pass it. 'Which' also is not modifying 'own' because 'own' is no noun; in essence, 'which' modifies the style, the relative pronoun's nearest
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D) looked on by the classical cellists of the world as perhaps the world’s best, who plays in an ever-changing style all his own, which also employs
--> who wrongly modifies the world’s best.
which wrongly modifies his own.
I feel that 'who' does modify correctly 'the world's best' meaning the best person. Therefore, we may pass it. 'Which' also is not modifying 'own' because 'own' is no noun; in essence, 'which' modifies the style, the relative pronoun's nearest
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