Your word count is good and you make a number of convincing points here. But there’s room for improvement in wording, grammar, and organization. Some of your claims are wordy and vague, like “the argument presents inconclusive information, offering dubious support, and from this draws unreasonably far-reaching conclusions.” In your first full paragraph, you say the argument doesn’t provide qualitative figures - I believe you mean quantitative, and the difference is rather important. It’s
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