The first thing I notice is the use of noun modifiers at the beginning of both (A) and(B):
A. Without adequate amounts of sleep, people's newly acquired skills and also
B. Without the adequate amount of sleep they need, people's newly acquired skills and even
Without adequate amounts of sleep,..." - logically, this modifier should describepeople . But in (A), there are no "people", really: since "people's" is possessive, the opening modifier describes "people's
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A. Without adequate amounts of sleep, people's newly acquired skills and also
B. Without the adequate amount of sleep they need, people's newly acquired skills and even
Without adequate amounts of sleep,..." - logically, this modifier should describepeople . But in (A), there are no "people", really: since "people's" is possessive, the opening modifier describes "people's
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