I reviewed my essay and here is what I notice:
•Length: 427 words / 2685 characters -> goal is 500 words / 3000 characters
•Obvious spelling / grammar errors: 9
o -> Also with ,
•Heavy use of passive voice
o What is your opinion on using passive voice to avoid repetition? (e.g. It is stated vs. the argument states)
•Words/phrases that are used very frequently:
o That -> replace with which, or participle construction
o Argument -> replace with passage, excerpt,
...
•Length: 427 words / 2685 characters -> goal is 500 words / 3000 characters
•Obvious spelling / grammar errors: 9
o -> Also with ,
•Heavy use of passive voice
o What is your opinion on using passive voice to avoid repetition? (e.g. It is stated vs. the argument states)
•Words/phrases that are used very frequently:
o That -> replace with which, or participle construction
o Argument -> replace with passage, excerpt,
...
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