My GMAT exam is on Thursday the 18th and to exercise the AWA I try to write one essay per day!
I am trying to improve my writing and I would appreciate your feedback very much!
The following appeared in an article in a health–and–fitness magazine:
“Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the minerals necessary for good
health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are
hospitalized less frequently
...
I am trying to improve my writing and I would appreciate your feedback very much!
The following appeared in an article in a health–and–fitness magazine:
“Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the minerals necessary for good
health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are
hospitalized less frequently
...
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