Dark Chocolate has been know to have great health benefits;in addition to its possibilities for lowering blood pressure, theingredients of dark chocolate may also helpit to serve as an anti-depressant.
A) in addition toits possibilities for lowering
--> wordy.
B) in addition toits possibilities to lower
C) besides the possibility thatit lowers
D) besides thepossible lowering of
E) besides possibly lowering
--> concise and correct.
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A) in addition toits possibilities for lowering
--> wordy.
B) in addition toits possibilities to lower
C) besides the possibility thatit lowers
D) besides thepossible lowering of
E) besides possibly lowering
--> concise and correct.
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