A 32% wage-hike, working four days a week, and above all a higher standard of factory safety is a demand that management must meet if it wishes to avoid a crippling strike.
Meaning analysis:
The sentence is talking about three things here and these things are demands that management must meet.
Error:
1) "And" is a parallelism marker and is used to show a list. The three demands here are not parallel. A verb-ing (action) cannot be parallel to noun phrases.
2) Subject verb: Whenever
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Meaning analysis:
The sentence is talking about three things here and these things are demands that management must meet.
Error:
1) "And" is a parallelism marker and is used to show a list. The three demands here are not parallel. A verb-ing (action) cannot be parallel to noun phrases.
2) Subject verb: Whenever
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