Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: First Time AWA Essay (any feedback welcomed)

I have practiced some AWAs without being timed, actually looking at some templates from the forums or from Magoosh just to get a feel for actually discussing the argument presented instead of forming my own opinion (like most timed essays I've had to do before) so this is my first one done while timed and without any outside resources. The source is one of the Manhattan GMATCATs.
The following appeared in a corporate memorandum of a beverage manufacturer:

“Our promotional price reductions on energy drinks have been highly successful, as we have seen a dramatic increase in unit sales. Further, surveys of our consumers indicate that this promotion was favorably received by the majority of our customers. Therefore, to improve our company’s profitability and enhance its perception in the eyes of consumers, similar price reductions should be offered on all drinks produced by our firm.”