Anyone else think it is very sloppy to write "some researchers" and talk about some researchers then write it again and say "some researchers" talking about a different group?
Clear writing would say other researchers. A lot of the confusion in the passage is drawn from this poorly written statement. If I was marking this person's AWA essay I would fail them for bad writing.
Imagine I wrote some NBAers think the NBA should call the rules such as travelling. In addition, the
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Clear writing would say other researchers. A lot of the confusion in the passage is drawn from this poorly written statement. If I was marking this person's AWA essay I would fail them for bad writing.
Imagine I wrote some NBAers think the NBA should call the rules such as travelling. In addition, the
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