Could you please confirm if my structuring is accurate ?
Country X's recent stock-trading scandal should not diminish investors' confidence in the country's stockmarket.
[Above is a claim / sub-conclusion, doesnt look like its the main conclusion ]
For onething, the discovery of the scandal confirms that Country has a strong regulatory system , as the following considerations show.
[Reason for the above conclusion, can this be thought of as evidence to support above conclusion ]
In any stock market, some fraudulent activitity is inevitable.
Fact
If a stock market is well regulated, any significant stock-trading fraud in it will be very likely be discovered.
Claim (seems like an mini conclusion to me) ...the main conclusion as well as its the final point ...any fraud will be discovered (there is nothing more to talk about once this point is made)
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Country X's recent stock-trading scandal should not diminish investors' confidence in the country's stockmarket.
[Above is a claim / sub-conclusion, doesnt look like its the main conclusion ]
For onething, the discovery of the scandal confirms that Country has a strong regulatory system , as the following considerations show.
[Reason for the above conclusion, can this be thought of as evidence to support above conclusion ]
In any stock market, some fraudulent activitity is inevitable.
Fact
If a stock market is well regulated, any significant stock-trading fraud in it will be very likely be discovered.
Claim (seems like an mini conclusion to me) ...the main conclusion as well as its the final point ...any fraud will be discovered (there is nothing more to talk about once this point is made)
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