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The argument claims that the enforcement efforts of the authorities to prevent illegal drugs from entering the country have resulted in an increase in the illegal use of cocaine. This conclusion is based on the premise that as the authorities have become more vigilant in their efforts to prevent illegal drugs from entering the country, many drug traffickers have switched from marijuana or heroin to cocaine. The argument is based on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence, the argument
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