If we hide the participial phrase, we see that "also enjoying" is incorrect for various reasons, most obvious is tense agreement. The correct form ishe also enjoyed .
While Noble Sissle may be best known for his collaboration with Eubie Blake,as both a vaudeville performer and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals , also enjoyingan independent career as a singer with such groups as Hahn's Jubilee Singers.
Eliminate A and B
Next, the idiom bothX and Y is the proper form. Instead,
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While Noble Sissle may be best known for his collaboration with Eubie Blake,as both a vaudeville performer and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals , also enjoyingan independent career as a singer with such groups as Hahn's Jubilee Singers.
Eliminate A and B
Next, the idiom bothX and Y is the proper form. Instead,
...
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