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The argument claims that Apogee company was more profitable when it had all its operations in one location than today. The argument further suggests that apogee company should close its field offices and conduct all its operations from a single location as this would improve profitability by cutting costs and helping the company maintain better supervision of all employees.

Stated in this way the argument reveals example of leap of faith, poor reasoning and ill-defined terminology. It also fails
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