Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: So dogged were Frances Perkins investigations of the garment

So dogged were Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.

A. and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,

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',and' used to join DC(so dogged...industry) with IC (her lobbying...persistent) : Incorrect
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