Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: In Rembrandt's The Night Watch, in the second plane of the

Hello,

I am not an expert but I get most SC questions right. Here are my 2 cents:

E. to the left of the company's two military leaders but behind them, and illuminated by a bright shaft of light, stands a little girl with a dead chicken suspended from her dress

"to the left of the company's two military leaders but behind them", is wordy
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