Ollie this is clearly a 6. (Actually, more like a 7.) There's some very inventive phrasing, no mistakes, and an avoidance of the usual pre-fab phrases and cookie-cutter constructions. It's easily the best essay I've seen here in the AWA section.
Funny how few responses there are to these requests for critiques, but, late as I am, I had to chime in.
Did you do this in 30 minutes?
Funny how few responses there are to these requests for critiques, but, late as I am, I had to chime in.
Did you do this in 30 minutes?
