Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: Those who fault the intrusion of amateurs into areas requ

Questions about thechoice E .

Since I see another version of this question, and choice E states like this...

E. Heinrich Schliemann, who as a wealthy German businessman had an obsession with antiquity; he unwittingly destroyed the very artifacts he hoped to unearthwhen he deployed

......and it's still incorrect.

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Another question is how are*cite * and*as an example * redundant? I feel it quite natural to read "cite