OE :
The original sentence contains two problems. First, “towering a hundred feet over brownstone units” is
unclear and implies the absurd meaning that the glass apartments are located directly over
brownstone units in different buildings. Second, the verb "accentuated" should be in the present tense,
since the earlier use of the present perfect tense ("have embraced") implies that the embracing is still
happening, and therefore that the ethic accentuates the lives in the
...
The original sentence contains two problems. First, “towering a hundred feet over brownstone units” is
unclear and implies the absurd meaning that the glass apartments are located directly over
brownstone units in different buildings. Second, the verb "accentuated" should be in the present tense,
since the earlier use of the present perfect tense ("have embraced") implies that the embracing is still
happening, and therefore that the ethic accentuates the lives in the
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