Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives , capitalized on her keen observation and love of the naturalworld.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
-"coordinating" breaks parallelism with "capitalized". "coordinating" should be "coordinated" b/c "capitalized" is NOT UNDERLINED.
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with
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(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
-"coordinating" breaks parallelism with "capitalized". "coordinating" should be "coordinated" b/c "capitalized" is NOT UNDERLINED.
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with
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