Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: AWA evaluation for kudos :)

The argument claims that Olympics foods is a company that is expected to grow because the costs of processing have gone down in parallel industries, such as the color film industry, and the experience that company has gathered through its first 25 years. Hence, Olympic foods is expected to grow by minimizing cost and thus maximizing profits. Stated in this way, this argument manipulates facts and conveys a distorted view of the situation. The conclusion of this argument relies a lot of unstated
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