Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which is the more conventional approach for someone new to financial planning, real estate has become increasingly attractive to young people looking for a first investment.
A)Instead of buying stocks and bonds,which is the more conventional approach for someone new to financial planning ,real estate has become increasingly attractive to young people as a first investment.
Usage of 'instead of' is incorrect, we want to show a preference here and not the replacement
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A)Instead of buying stocks and bonds,
Usage of 'instead of' is incorrect, we want to show a preference here and not the replacement
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