souvik101990 wrote:
Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected the Hudson River at Albany to the Great Lakes at Buffalo, providing the port of New York City with a direct water link to the heartland of the North American continent.
A.Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canalconnected
The modifier Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep should refer to the Erie canal directly but here there is one more modifier which makes the construction awkward. Also, the pronoun "it" appears before the actual noun. But it should be reverse, for the sentence to be more clearer.
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