Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: The largest of all the planets, not only is Jupiter three

I just wanted to highlight the four errors in the main sentence itself.

The sentence starts with an adjectival phrase“The largest of all the planets” . After reading this phrase, we expect to come across the noun that this adjective modifies. However, the sentence then reads “not only is Jupiter..”.

This isthe first error in the sentence.The beginning modifier should be immediately followed by the noun that it modifies.

The second error is the incorrect use of the idiom “so..as”.
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