Scorpi0n wrote:
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Rhetorical construction; Agreement; Grammatical construction
This sentence, explaining interconnections among a number of events, needs to be streamlined as much as possible in order to become understandable. To this end, unnecessary words and structures should be eliminated. Prominent among these are the relative clauses beginning with that.
Additionally, the subject of this sentence is the plural trenches, which requires a plural verb.
A That were cut ... and that were arising
This sentence, explaining interconnections among a number of events, needs to be streamlined as much as possible in order to become understandable. To this end, unnecessary words and structures should be eliminated. Prominent among these are the relative clauses beginning with that.
Additionally, the subject of this sentence is the plural trenches, which requires a plural verb.
A That were cut ... and that were arising
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