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The following appeared as part of a newspaper editorial:
“Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The
school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have reported some impressive achievements in
college. In future budgets the school board should use a greater portion of the available funds to buy more
computers, and all schools in the district should adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum.”
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