jaganpani wrote:
Here is my reasoning:
A) with the ultimate goal of reducing the guests who end up expressing overall dissatisfaction with the service in the hotels ->The number of guests can be reduced. The guests themselves cannot be reduced. On a funny note, you cannot really reduce their height or something :D So, eliminate.
B) with the goal to ultimately reduce the number of guests who end up expressing overall dissatisfaction with the hotels’ service ->Incorrect modifier 'ultimately'. This modifier should modify 'goal' and not 'reduce'. So, eliminate.
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