General GMAT Questions and Strategies | AWA advice

Hi, I just started my GMAT prep and I began with IR and AWA. This is the first AWA essay I write and wish to receive some critiques and comments.
Can you please feel free to write any comments and score me if possible? Many thanks!

The following appeared in an article in a consumer-products magazine:
“Two of today’s best-selling brands of full-strength prescription medication for the relief of excess stomach acid, Acid- Ease and Pepticaid, are now available in milder nonprescription forms. Doctors
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