Hijackspire , E says:
payments are not expected to be paid when they will be due .
The issue with this is that E ispassive voice. Here, it is not clear as towho is not expected to make payments.
The original sentence clearly intends to depict that thebank is not expected to make payments. That meaning is not coming out in E.
Concealing thedoer of the action is often a big problem with passive voice constructs.
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payments are not expected to be paid when they will be due .
The issue with this is that E ispassive voice. Here, it is not clear as towho is not expected to make payments.
The original sentence clearly intends to depict that thebank is not expected to make payments. That meaning is not coming out in E.
Concealing thedoer of the action is often a big problem with passive voice constructs.
p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana
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