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The following appeared in a research paper written for an introductory economics course:
“For the past century, an increase in the number of residential building permits issued per month in a particular
region has been a reliable indicator of coming improvements to that region’s economy. If the monthly number of
residential building permits issued rises consistently for a few months, the local unemployment rate almost always
falls and economic production increases. This well-established
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