daagh wrote:
A. wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of----wrong because, the reference to ---they-- is ambiguous; it could be wasps, or the 900 or so species or yellow jackets; drop it. In addition, a society is gathering and not a physical place; hence society and where cannot go together.
B. wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of ---a good choice using the resumptive modifier wasps that repeats an already stated noun and defines it with further info.
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