daagh wrote:
Anuj
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D. Ceramic artists, using technical knowledge as well as experience, manipulate clay with an endless amount of creative sculpting and firing methods - it has a subtle change in meaning. Moreover, a simple construction in C is better than that in D.
Is it that essential? Whether they manipulate clay using their knowledge or/and experience or even perhaps by magic does not matter as long as they achieve the results. IMO, the parenthesis is not so essential.
However,
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