OE from Magoosh
Choice (A) use the casual “when you do X” structure to denote a universal truth. This is acceptable in colloquial speech, but unacceptable on the GMAT. This choice also contains a pronoun mistake: “this” can’t refer to an action. This choice is incorrect.
Choice (B)’s use of the two infinitives is awkward. This changes the meaning because it eliminates all uncertainty. Finally, the first infinitive, “to compulsively hold,” is a split infinitive; the GMAT does
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Choice (A) use the casual “when you do X” structure to denote a universal truth. This is acceptable in colloquial speech, but unacceptable on the GMAT. This choice also contains a pronoun mistake: “this” can’t refer to an action. This choice is incorrect.
Choice (B)’s use of the two infinitives is awkward. This changes the meaning because it eliminates all uncertainty. Finally, the first infinitive, “to compulsively hold,” is a split infinitive; the GMAT does
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