I request to please rate my essay. Thanks in advance.
This is the first essay i'm writing. I need your suggestions to improve my writing skills.(I'm kind of ok with my writing since i wrote for many newsletter in my college and company, also typing speed is good(i typed nearly 30-40 words per minute in my typing writing exam)).
STIMULUS:
The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company:
“When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location,
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This is the first essay i'm writing. I need your suggestions to improve my writing skills.(I'm kind of ok with my writing since i wrote for many newsletter in my college and company, also typing speed is good(i typed nearly 30-40 words per minute in my typing writing exam)).
STIMULUS:
The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company:
“When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location,
...