Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: According to the most recent survey of our readers, nearly 70% of the

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The argument claims that as per a recent survey of the readers of magazine, 70 % of the respondents indicated that they are planning to build or purchase a new home over the next two years. The author thus concludes that the construction industry continues to offer lucrative opportunities for investment. He also further suggests that lucrative investment opportunities are the reason why people are planning to buy or build houses. The author also mentions that the results of survey also indicate growth in construction industry is likely to accelerate in the near future. Stated in this way the argument fails to mention several key factors on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion is based on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence, the argument is weak and has several flaws.

Firstly, the argument readily assumes that majority of the respondents, who indicated that they are planning to build or purchase
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