Grade: 3.0
Biggest room for improvement:
Increase the length of your introduction and conclusion. They should be their own paragraphs. Check the stickied 6.0 template for more information.
Please don't take my advice to literal, as I am still a learner myself.
Biggest room for improvement:
Increase the length of your introduction and conclusion. They should be their own paragraphs. Check the stickied 6.0 template for more information.
Please don't take my advice to literal, as I am still a learner myself.
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