Grade: 4.5
I added my comments below. There are multiple grammatical errors. additions in bold. italics means remove.
Your paragraphs are quite good. The grade would be much higher if you applied the template better, which you can easily do with exercise.
The Argument claims that Braeburn Corporation should increase manufacturing soy products to increae the profits. Stated in this way, the argument merely manipulates the facts and presents a distorted view of the situation. It also fails to
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I added my comments below. There are multiple grammatical errors. additions in bold. italics means remove.
Your paragraphs are quite good. The grade would be much higher if you applied the template better, which you can easily do with exercise.
The Argument claims that Braeburn Corporation should increase manufacturing soy products to increae the profits. Stated in this way, the argument merely manipulates the facts and presents a distorted view of the situation. It also fails to
...
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