Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | First attempt for AWA (MGMAT CAT 1) - please rate!

Hi everyone,

I just completed my first GMAT CAT without any studying. This is my first attempt on AWA. Please rate it.
I look forward to hearing your comments and feedback.

Thanks!

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AWA ESSAYS: Analyze Argument
ESSAY QUESTION:
The following appeared in a corporate memorandum of a beverage manufacturer:

“Our promotional price
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