Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: Beyond the immediate cash flow crisis that the museum faces,

Remove thefluff.

Beyond the immediate cash flow crisis that the museum faces ,its survival depends on if it can broaden its membership and leave its cramped quarters for a sitewhere it can store and exhibit its more than 12,000 artifacts.

Here the pronoun 'it' refers to 'the museum'. Now the important thing about'if' is that it is only valid when used in atrue conditional statement .
For ex:If you make a right turn, we can stop at a gas station . If we reverse this example, we get: We can
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