Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Could help me rate my AWA?

Hey guys,

I am finishing my GMAT preparation, and now I'm practing for the AWA and would like to have some idea of how I am performing.

As I've have read a few of the templates and tips in here, I decided to write under the 30 minutes restriction to really feel how it would be on testday.

Thanks

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Argument:

“Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury’s circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read
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